Friday, October 5, 2012

Charming Children

My students have been especially charming lately. This year my class has really taken ownership of the room.

It all began last week. I was frustrated after a particularly crazy morning. The students had been gradually building their stamina for reading and writing independently. I had been so proud how intentional and self driven the children had been during this time. On this particular day, however we had madness. Students were talking to each other, getting up to look at different books, and just generally doing anything but what they were supposed to be doing. I called the class back to the rug and, with my head in my hands, asked what they thought went wrong today.

I had my own list of thoughts on the matter but thankfully called on a student before launching into them. This sweet overactive boy said, "You know Ms. B we love writing. It's because we live it we're talking too much." Another child chipped in, "Yeah, we just get so excited we want to show it to somebody." this was not what I thought the problem was.

Intrigued I asked how could we fix this. The students though for a moment and said they would like to share before they went to write and then again after they finished writing. They named it the "share rule." The students now pair and share for 30 seconds before writing and then meet with partners for 10 minutes after writing.

This solution led to another problem I didn't realize we had. One child, a kid by the way labeled the previous year as a serious behavior problem with bullying behaviors, said he had concerns about the partner sharing. He expressed his concerns by saying, "You keep saying we're a community but I don't feel like we are. We are always partnered with people from our table teams but if we are a real community we should get to know everybody." His statement shocked me. I had been very intentional with the table groups. I started the year with the plan of making real cooperative learning teams and had been using resources from Laura Candler. I thought the teams were going really well and hadn't thought that the students would feel limited by them. (I still by the way love her stuff. Please visit http://www.lauracandler.com for great resources.) Several other students felt the same. We agreed to make a partner wheel that would change daily so that everyone would get a chance to partner with everyone. They called this the "Community Rule."

After we had created a solution for that problem, I asked if there were any other reasons for the off task behavior. One student mentioned that people were choosing spots too close to one another. We decided that you were to close if when you stretched out on the floor you could touch someone else. We named that the "Snow Angel Rule."

Finally the same "behavior problem" said we had one more problem. It had to do with the rugs in our room. I have a long standing two children per rug rule. My reflective student mentioned that the problem with that was that if there were two boys or two girls on the rug together the children would get into trouble. The class all agreed that the "Rug Rule" should be only one boy and one girl per rug.

I was pretty impressed with their problem solving and reflective thinking at this point but they weren't done. I get a lot of ideas from whole brain teaching (http://www.wholebrainteaching.com) and I use four of their rules. I say a rule number and my students respond with the rule and hand motions. They love this and it's really nice that if kids break a rule I just say the number and the whole class responds. I rarely have to directly reprimand a student. Anyway the kids asked to make some call and response rules for these too.

Rug Rule: 1 boy 1 girl (bring up right hand with pointer finger pointing up then bring up left hand with pointer finger pointing up)

Snow Angel Rule: If you are too close ( bring hands together like praying) then you have to move (separate your hands)

Community Rule: look at the wheel (point with your right hand and make a circular motion)

Share Rule: (have both hands palm up) First 30 seconds (move left hand up and down) Last 10 minutes (move right hand up and down)

As directed by children, we do the call and response before reading or writing to self. The new rules have been in place for a week now. My class has performed amazingly and even managed to surpass our goal of 30 minutes independent working time.

Lesson learned: Take the time to allow the students to problem solve behavior problems in the classroom.

Friday, August 24, 2012

Back to School

I'm back! It's been a great summer but I have been awful at my goal of getting this blog up and running. Hopefully I'll be better at it during the school year.

So far this has been the year of Pinterest. My classroom has never looked so organized. It's a blue and yellow polka-dot extravaganza. Pictures of the different projects will be added Monday.

It all started with Debbie Diller's "Spaces and Places" and the idea of color blocking. All baskets, posters, and labels are in shades of blue and yellow. Keeping the colors consistent really helped with keeping the room looking unified. The hope is to one day replace the two rugs with one blue one.

Then it was time to re-look at all the stuff I had in my classroom. The room needed a purge. All furniture was evaluated. If it didn't serve multiple purposes and fit with the idea of individualized, child centered instruction it had to go. That hurt in the beginning but began to feel really good.

Saturday, April 28, 2012

Actual Revision!

The joy and ease of Kelly Gallagher strikes again.

I'm not sure why it happened but my CFL essays are actually being revised by the students! Up until now I was at a loss how to get my third graders to stop feeling such an attachment to their first drafts. They might look back over their papers and add a period or a capital letter, but rarely would they ever change any wording. This week was different.

It was week two with using mentor texts. I had modeled revision for the students, making sure to let them hear my thinking. Two students were quick to finish and hand in their essays. I thanked them for their lousy drafts, reminding them that all drafts are lousy, and handed the drafts back to them with the instructions to read the drafts out loud to each other. I handed student A student B's draft and student B student A's. The students looked at me, looked at their drafts, and went off to read to each other.

I positioned myself in the room so that I could spy on the students. In the past, these peer revision sessions mostly resulted in comments like, "This is good" or "You need a capital letter here." This time I heard one student say, "I see here (student pointed at paper) you stated your claim. You forgot to use a comma with your three main reasons." I was so excited! The students were using the conversation from the mapping exercises to discuss their papers. Even better, one of the students came up to me and asked, "Can I start over on a fresh sheet of paper? This middle part doesn't make sense."

So far this week I have had all but 4 students complete their drafts. Of those students, two are in the process of typing their third and fourth drafts and two are hand writing their second drafts. Out of 22 papers turned in to me, I have had 6 students with significant changes to their original drafts. All six of those students had more that 3 drafts before they turned in a final paper to me.

Here are some final papers turned in by my students. They were given the option to type or hand write their papers. Unfortunately, it was mostly the students with nice handwriting that chose to type.

The first and the last paragraphs were written after using the mapping technique with mentor texts. The middle paragraph was premapping. Notice how jumbled her message is in the middle paragraph. She mainly copied notes straight from her daybook.

Mentored and Mentoring

This past Monday, I was excited to get a chance to leave my classroom and the annual pressure leading up to End of Grade tests and go to UNCC's Writing Project's Spring Conference. Kelly Gallagher was the key note speaker and is now my new go to writing guru.

My grade level has been working on using the Common Core standards to teach and assess argumentative writing. Our classes had been studying the differences between compact fluorescent and incandescent light bulbs for almost two months. Students had listened to speakers, created a 3 word essay, read articles, created comparison charts, read Venn Diagrams, analyzed charts, gone over rubrics for what a good argumentative essay contains, and been given a checklist to keep in their draft books. Yet, they still complained they didn't know what to write.

Kelly Gallagher’s maps were the missing piece. I was giving students lots of factual texts but nothing for them to use as a mentor to guide their writing. When I did show them an argumentative essay, I didn't teach them how to use it to create their own writing piece.

On Tuesday I went in early to work and began rewriting my writing lesson plans for the week. I found wonderful mentor texts at Write Source.


http://www.thewritesource.com/studentmodels/

I gave the students a printed copy of an introductory paragraph and a conclusion paragraph. After a discussion about the purpose of a mentor text, we began "mapping" the introductory paragraph. Students watched as I used the mentor text and the map to write my own introductory paragraph.


My Mapping with the Students
Finally the students had a chance to try. It was amazing. For the first time ever, not a single child asked to go the bathroom or got out of their seat to grab a pencil. They immediately began writing. The same students that the Friday before couldn't seem to get more than one sentence written in 45 minutes were itching to write. I had freed them from the unknown. They had plenty to say and now they knew how to say it!



Mapping and Second Draft